As I tell you in the last post I'm going to explain why I mame my blog phoebe .
It reminds me one of my best friendssome years ago .
Me as Phoebe are persons who always say that they think in this moment. When I realize that a friend is doing something that is bad for me I tell him what I'm feeling. In one progamme in Tv serial, I think is Ross who don't go to do her massage as Phoebe's place. Phoebe in this moment feels that it is only do for a person that is not a really friend. I have only three persons in my life that I consider that they are my really friends. For me the rest of people are people that I am with.
My young life is not really the same as any other child. It's because I have suffered Three operations in my eyes. The first, it was when I was only 2 years old . This makes to me see the life in a diferent way than the rest of the people. This has a good thing now that I don't need glasses. This difficult situation when I was young permits to me relativity the bad situation that I´m suffering and start to laugh .
Another thing that I like to do as Phoebe is sing. Normally when I am in a good humor I change the real letters to the songs and I song what i'm feeling in this moment.
I am person who loves animals. I couldn't be a vegetarian as Phoebe because I have lack of iron in my blood.
3 comments:
I like Phoebe too.
What do you mean, you have lack of iron in your blood?
That my blood hasn`t the iron that is necesary. Because the vegetarian diet is with less iron I coudn't be a vegetarian
It's difficult to read your text, even though I can understand what you want to say.
Here are some more comments to your language:
-why I NAMED MY BLOG phoebe.
-It REMINDS me one of my best friends SOME YEARS AGO. (WO)
-Me as Phoebe are persons WHO always say that THEY think. (0)
-When I REALIZE that a friend is doing SOMETHING that is BAD FOR me I tell him what I'm feeling.
-For me the rest of people ARE people (that) I AM with.
-My young life is not really the same as ANY OTHER child.
-it was when I was only 2 years OLD.
-This makes to me (0) see the life in a diferent way THAN the rest of the people
-This has a good thing now that I DON'T need glasses.
(PHOEBE, TRY TO WRITE YOUR SENTENCES WITHOUT THINKING IN SPANISH, PLEASE. TRY TO USE SENTENCES THINKING ABOUT THE STUCTURE OF SENTENCES IN ENGLISH. REMEMBER TO USE AN "S" WITH THE 3RD PERSON SINGULAR, THE AUXILIARY VERBS FOR QUESTIONS, TAKE WORD ORDER (WO) INTO ACCOUNT, ETC.)
THESE ARE SENTENCES THAT NEED REVISION AND CHANGE:
- In one day in Tv serial Friends, I think is Ross who don't go to her massage.
-Also makes to me now than when I have a problem I relativity the situation and start to laugh .
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